Just came up with this yesterday and finished it today!

[JustTakeAPebble]

Hi fellow members of UR!

I'd like to present to you all a recent creation I had written called StarWhale!

http://www.sendspace.com/file/ot19ou

It is in the key of E minor and I'll look forward to hearing any feedback you have about it!

Simon

[guntervent]

Not Bad Simon, Relaxing a little bit of mystic Floyd and RUSH in there I detect!!!

[JustTakeAPebble]

Floyd and Rush? what a compliment where do you see them come in that song?

Thank you

Simon

[guntervent]

The background deeper parts remind me of the way Some of the Rush early work was for example on caress of steel there is one part of your comp that I was waiting for neal to start speaking. if you know the album you will know what part i'm talking about . The floyd part I suppose is the relaxing flow of it I associate it as with the backing guitar at the beginning of us and them. thats just my humble opinion. Nice job!

[JustTakeAPebble]

Wow, thanks

Simon

[rice_pudding]

Maybe you could try using the piano in the background a bit more, try to suggest some contrasting harmonies etc. But great, i enjoyed it, it conveys a great sense of feeling

Rob

[Trigger]

I couldn't download it

[JustTakeAPebble]

damn... er i dunno what to suggest..

Simon

[RR-ElectricAngel]

Great to hear from you Simon. I haven't had the time to sit down and enjoy your music yet. I promise I'll try to listen to it by this weekend.

[Cpt Matt Sparrow]

That was very good Simon; a great piece to use as an introductory piece ie a pre cursor for a bigger work maybe?

Cheers

Matt

[JustTakeAPebble]

Sadly the programme I used to create this song, has crashed and died the day before yesterday, so I won't be able to make any new stuff with the programme.

Simon