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Pass The Torch - Simon Fielder

Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 11:23 pm
by siro_angel
A poem i had written on the spot on RR.tk thought id share it here too :)

Pass The Torch

I will pass on the torch,
That holds the Rhoads' flame,
Through the darkness of days,
Through the stillness of tame,
I will pass on the light of his teaching,
To my future children I'll pass his wing,
I can hear the wind whispers his name,
Do you not hear the same?
His memory will live on,
His light forever shone,
His memory will never die,
The skies above are clear,
I can feel him near,
Can you?

Simon Fielder

Posted: Tue May 15, 2007 8:55 am
by Trigger
Nice poem Simon :) thanks for sharing.

Posted: Tue May 15, 2007 11:11 pm
by frank
thank you.

Posted: Tue May 15, 2007 11:16 pm
by siro_angel
frank wrote:thank you.
:) Thank you for wha? lol :oops:

Posted: Tue May 15, 2007 11:44 pm
by frank
for sharing of course!!! you silly geek.

Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 2:20 am
by Sarab
Very nice geek, I mean, Simon.

Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 4:02 pm
by Six_Strung_Out
Simon, have you attempted to sing that poem as lyrics over guitar chords yet? Years ago I wrote a short poem for Jimi Hendrix. Then, after a little inspiration time, I found a fitting guitar arraignment and a melody for the words. No matter what you do with your poem it does show much heart.
Thanks for sharing it here and over at the RR.tk site.


Ray

Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 4:04 pm
by siro_angel
I aint tried thinking putting music to it cos i lack in that area of making music to words lol... even though i have attempted with Broken and Moonlight!

But still thank you :) I like it when people like what i put out cos it boosts my confidence which i also lack most times.

Simon