The Poet (A newer calmer experimental film made in 3 days)

[JustTakeAPebble]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H6Xq_tggxXE

Feedback, comments and ratings welcomed

Simon

[David]

I must say, I really enjoyed it!
The setting was great, taking place in a home. The music was very soothing and fit perfectly with the video. I also loved the flashback of the children at 1:31-2:07 that complemented with the writing. My most favorite was just watching the scenery changes as he still struggles to write until the weary dark and beyond.
I think what made it interesting was the the sense of being modern. Giving the sense that it sounds believable in today's world. There's also room for more as always. Getting into the writer's mind would make it a lot more interesting (ie. the writer crumples up some papers, throws pens, etc.).

Great work Simon! Good work for something that was done in 3 days

[Trigger]

I must say, I really enjoyed it!
The setting was great, taking place in a home. The music was very soothing and fit perfectly with the video. I also loved the flashback of the children at 1:31-2:07 that complemented with the writing. My most favorite was just watching the scenery changes as he still struggles to write until the weary dark and beyond.
I think what made it interesting was the the sense of being modern. Giving the sense that it sounds believable in today's world. There's also room for more as always. Getting into the writer's mind would make it a lot more interesting (ie. the writer crumples up some papers, throws pens, etc.).

Great work Simon! Good work for something that was done in 3 days

I agree fully and I got the sense of the poet being absorbed in his work and the passage of time. A lovely piece of work Simon.