Ultimate Rhoads

Valentines Day

Beauty, deep inside,
See the gentle petals fall,
No need to hide,
Lovers pressed, against wall,

No tears shed, not today,
A quest to love by day valentine,
The lovers come out to play,
Who's heart could be mine,

A crowd of roses i hold,
Dream of you beside me,
Till I wrinkle, till I'm old,
My love further than sea,

At last we're together,
A burning candle on the table,
Loving and kissing forever,
This is the end of my fable.

Simon Fielder

I enjoyed reading it. Good job

Nice work simomn, was it written for me

Trigger wrote:Nice work simomn, was it written for me

lol..



I wonder how the women feel about this poem since the men like it

Simon

i was going to post about it, but then i saw that trigger posted for the chicks already

highpriestess wrote:i was going to post about it, but then i saw that trigger posted for the chicks already

lmao well it was written for whoever percieves it as theirs..

Simon

no ME. he wrote it for ME. thank you simon.

frank wrote:

Trigger wrote:Nice work simomn, was it written for me

no ME. he wrote it for ME. thank you simon.

lol

I got men and women arguing over me.. whats next?

Simon

Dammit! It is for ME,ME,ME,ME! Got it??

Sarab wrote:Dammit! It is for ME,ME,ME,ME! Got it??

lol which demonstrates my point guys and women are fighting over me

Simon