paper i wrote on randy for english
over 17 pages.... ~30+ hours of work
repetitive because of page requirements
Table of Contents
Introduction………………………………………………………………………..2
Biographical Review……………………………………………………………3-4
Defining Moments………………………………………………………………5-8
Stough Park…………………………………………………………….….5
Forming Quiet Riot………………………………………………………..6
Ozzy Osbourne…………………………………………………….………7
The Plane………………………………………………………………….8
Critical Choices………………………………………………………………..9-10
Ozzy……………………………………………………………………….9
The Plane………………………………...………………………………10
Pivotal People…………………………………………………………..…….11-13
Delores Rhoads…………………………………..………………………11
Kelly Garni………………………………………………………….……12
Ozzy Osbourne……………………………………………...……………13
Conclusion……………………………………………………………………….14
Works Cited………………………………………………………………...……15
Randy Rhoads: Introduction
I chose Randy Rhoads for my project because I felt that he would be the most interesting person to research. I had some prior knowledge of him and his past. But I wanted to learn more. I believe that one of the reasons I chose Randy Rhoads as my subject, was the fact that he has been my favorite guitarist since I had first heard him playing guitar on the album, â€
Randy Rhoads english paper
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and well planned out, I know little about how to set the perfect essay, but yours looks very professional and accurate and well thought out 
I wouldn't cite Wikipedia in a formal paper. All my professors HATE that. And was that Randy Rhoads: A Life book ever published? Cause if not, professors also frown upon non published works as well. The writing is perfect and all, just the sources maybe need to be thought upon, not unless you know your teachers are ok with sources like the ones you've used.
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It is very well written, especially for your age.
The only criticism is that it is reproduction of just known facts without any personal and/or academic input.
Please completely ignore though if you were asked to do that!!
Your teacher/school know more than a man on a message board LOL
Nice work though
Matt
The only criticism is that it is reproduction of just known facts without any personal and/or academic input.
Please completely ignore though if you were asked to do that!!
Your teacher/school know more than a man on a message board LOL
Nice work though
Matt
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I think I said great work before but I coudln't see it when I re-checked the thread 
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