What do you think, (be kind),
1st take.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J6lXt4q4W9o
Me playing Crazy Train...
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Hi espvh
The good things were; the tone was lovely and really sounded full and chunky , it was played with real conviction and also very musically.
The things to improve would be the rhythm of the chords, as they sounded out of time. Additionally the repeated note that is bent prior to the A being detuned (via de tuning or trem diving), is a B (3rd string 4th fret) and not an F sharp (4th string 4th fret.)
How long have you been playing?
Like I said nice tone!!8)
Matt
The good things were; the tone was lovely and really sounded full and chunky , it was played with real conviction and also very musically.
The things to improve would be the rhythm of the chords, as they sounded out of time. Additionally the repeated note that is bent prior to the A being detuned (via de tuning or trem diving), is a B (3rd string 4th fret) and not an F sharp (4th string 4th fret.)
How long have you been playing?
Like I said nice tone!!8)
Matt
Having a break from online activity for a while to concentrate on music. Please email if you need to get in touch. Matt
Cool thanks, I've been playing over for 20 years, mostly self taught, and a hobbie, never to serious, and this was a real quick "test", I didn't even know that that little camera I used had a video option, also this was a 1st take, mostly goofin' around..
"the repeated note that is bent prior to the A being detuned (via de tuning or trem diving), is a B (3rd string 4th fret) and not an F sharp (4th string 4th fret.)"
I didn't know that, oops....
"the repeated note that is bent prior to the A being detuned (via de tuning or trem diving), is a B (3rd string 4th fret) and not an F sharp (4th string 4th fret.)"
I didn't know that, oops....
'Scuse me tarbender, take me drunk, I'm home!
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Thanks for taking it as it was meant. I am always self conscious, that when I write a constructive criticism, I may (unintentionally) come across like one of the very types of critics that I despise on the internet, so thanks for your humility
You and your tone rock!!!
Matt
You and your tone rock!!!
Matt
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I know what your friend means though, on youtube especially there are some mean people who just delight in trolling clips and posting negative remarks.
This is a great forum to post on and always friendly.
More clips!!!
Matt
This is a great forum to post on and always friendly.
More clips!!!
Matt
Having a break from online activity for a while to concentrate on music. Please email if you need to get in touch. Matt