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Post subject: Song I wrote.. rather depressing ah well...  Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 8:13 pm |
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The Last Goodbye
If I’d die tomorrow,
Would I have the chance,
To save you from sorrow,
To take you to the dance,
I can see your glistened tears,
They strum down your cheek,
Please know,
I’ll ease your fears,
Tell me…
Do you think we’ll meet?
Will you never hear…
My heart beat?
I know when the day is here,
My spirit,
Will stand by your side,
No need to be afraid,
Now baby please don’t cry,
Know I’m not gone forever,
But it’s not the last goodbye,
We’ll soon be… together.
Simon Fielder
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 1:44 am |
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pretty deep for a punk-ass geek.
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Sarab
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 3:01 am |
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Simon, I thank you for this.
The timing couldn't have been better.
My mom passed away 13 years ago today.
Made me think. Thank you.
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siro_angel
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 7:12 am |
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Hey Gina Im sorry to hear about that, but thank you, ive never had that kind of response to my songs/poems. I hope you are ok  Hey Frank lol you alway smake me smile with the way you say your wordings.  Simon
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Sarab
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 11:51 pm |
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frank wrote: pretty deep for a punk-ass geek. hey, he's a poet & didn't know it!!! hahahahahahaha. sorry.
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Trigger
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 8:56 pm |
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So have you got music to go with this?
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siro_angel
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 9:35 pm |
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Trigger wrote: So have you got music to go with this? I dont trig lol I try my hardest to put music to it but it falls flat  why?  Simon
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