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 Post subject: Song I wrote.. rather depressing ah well...
PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 8:13 pm 
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The Last Goodbye

If I’d die tomorrow,
Would I have the chance,
To save you from sorrow,
To take you to the dance,

I can see your glistened tears,
They strum down your cheek,
Please know,
I’ll ease your fears,

Tell me…
Do you think we’ll meet?
Will you never hear…
My heart beat?

I know when the day is here,
My spirit,
Will stand by your side,
No need to be afraid,

Now baby please don’t cry,
Know I’m not gone forever,
But it’s not the last goodbye,
We’ll soon be… together.

Simon Fielder

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 1:44 am 
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pretty deep for a punk-ass geek.


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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 3:01 am 
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Simon, I thank you for this.
The timing couldn't have been better.
My mom passed away 13 years ago today.
Made me think. Thank you.

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 7:12 am 
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Hey Gina

Im sorry to hear about that, but thank you, ive never had that kind of response to my songs/poems. I hope you are ok :)

Hey Frank

lol you alway smake me smile with the way you say your wordings. :lol:

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 11:51 pm 
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frank wrote:
pretty deep for a punk-ass geek.


hey, he's a poet & didn't know it!!!
hahahahahahaha. :lol:
sorry.

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So have you got music to go with this?

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 9:35 pm 
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Trigger wrote:
So have you got music to go with this?


I dont trig lol I try my hardest to put music to it but it falls flat :( why? :P

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